More Win than Charlie Sheen (although that isn’t very difficult)

Ladies and Gentleman, you will find listed below the shortlists for our short story and poetry competitions. These shortlists were compiled by our judges, former editor Tiggy Johnson for short stories and MPU president Wendy Fleming for poetry.

And so, the names, in alphabetical order of the writers:

Short Story Shortlist 2011

‘The Other Guy’ – Emilie Collyer

‘Not My Son’ – Jennifer Goode

‘Luck of the Draw’ – Hayley Katzen

‘Wings’ – Kerrie McCure

‘Mandrake in the Marsh’ – Lachlan Plain

‘The Smiths’ – Eugene Yang

Poetry Shortlist 2011

‘The Space Between’ – Emilie Collyer

‘I Am The Lion on the edge of your bed…’ – Nathan Curnow

‘Remembering Laszlo’ – Greg Piko

‘Night Music’ – Kristen Roberts

‘Washington NYE’ – Anna Ryan-Punch

‘Half Empty’ – Marian Spires

‘Giraffes’ – Valerie Volk

As per our usual methods of torture here at page seventeen, we will not be revealing the winners and runners-up just yet. That’s the juicy bit left for our launch. Date and place are TBA on the launch at this point in time, but suffice to say that it will be early November and that it’s going to be a blast.

To everyone that made the shortlist, congratulations and I hope to see you at the launch. For all those who missed out this year, don’t be discouraged, and I hope to see you at the launch. Hell, anyone who’s stumbled onto this site from a writers blog or random facebook link, I hope to see you – wait for it – at the launch!

A big thank you to everyone who sent in work for the competitions. There’s always plenty of material that just misses the mark, that has a moment of bad luck and bows out without specific commendation. So, to anyone who didn’t get a story or poem into this shortlist: please keep sending your work out, whether it be to us or to the next available competition you come across.

Posted in News at September 7th, 2011. No Comments.

Tick Tock …

The end of the submission window must feel very close this side of the seasons. We begin winter and we begin the home stretch for those of you who have been chiseling away at your prose and preparing your entry to the page seventeen smorgasbord.

So, if you have a short story or poem that you think we’ll like, send it in to our competition and it might net you some prize money (and publication to boot). If you have a photo that you think will look good on the front cover of Issue 09, send it in and that fancy might become fact.

And don’t forget about our inaugural non-fiction component, revolving around the ‘Craft of Writing‘ theme. It can be a feature piece on the Emerging Writers’ Festival, or National Young Writers’ Month, or a particularly illuminating workshop. It may be an interview with a writer or ambassador for writing and publishing. It may be a reflective piece on your own experiences with the craft of writing. There are a lot of angles that can be taken for this theme. So if you have a piece, or even just a pitch, then submit@pageseventeen.com.au is ready to receive.

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Got some free time this Sunday? Come down to Page Parlour at Federation Square. It caps of the Emerging Writers’ Festival and is a fantastic little market of magazines, journals and small presses. Of course, page seventeen will be there as well. So, I hope to see you there.

Posted in News at June 2nd, 2011. 3 Comments.

Nearly that time …

Only one week to go until the submission window opens … hope everyone’s getting just a little bit excited!

You’ll find the guidelines and entry forms for 2011 now available at Downloads. Also, our Submit page has been updated with details for Issue 09.

We also have our competiton running as usual:

The judge for the short story is none other than Tiggy Johnson, former editor of page seventeen. For poetry it’s Wendy Fleming, currently the acting president of the Melbourne Poets Union. For the cover competition we have Blaise van Hecke, of Busybird Design.

Don’t forget we have a new non-fiction section running – the theme is ‘The Craft of Writing’. Remember that this theme does not affect any fiction submissions or cover competition entries. See our submission details for more information.

So, lock and load for next week, everyone! We still accept email submissions for our general, non-comp entries at submit@pageseventeen.com.au. Postal entries have a new destination:

PO Box 8078, Tottenham, VIC 3012

Any questions at all, don’t forget about our enquiry line, enquire@pageseventeen.com.au.

Posted in News at April 8th, 2011. 3 Comments.

Guest review: Tully Hansen on Sean M Whelan and the Interim Lovers’s ‘Softly and Suddenly’

Softly and Suddenly

by Sean M Whelan and the Interim Lovers

Softly and Suddenly sees Melbourne poet and performer Sean M Whelan reunited with long-time collaborator Andrew Watson and band – The Interim Lovers – to produce an album that settles somewhere between post-rock record and spoken word CD. In a series of six Fits we are presented the story of Ballard and Betsy, two inner urban Melburnians in the throes of a surreal affair, whose tale unfolds against the Lovers’ backdrop of sparse guitar, percussion and keening violin. Together Whelan’s words and Watson’s music carry the listener along in undulating waves towards the album’s haunting close.

The title comes from Lewis Carroll’s nonsense verse The Hunting of the Snark, in which the suite of poems has its beginning. Elements are freely and playfully borrowed, pressed into service either literally (Betsy gives Ballard a blank map) or metaphorically (Ballard at one point feels like he’s “wearing three pairs of boots”). Softly and Suddenly is not a retelling, and doesn’t require knowledge of the original (as Whelan himself discusses in interview), but will reward a (re)reading of Carroll’s work, which provides the key to much of the imagery (such as Ballard’s vision of “a Butcher and a Beaver… playing chess”).

Opening track The Landing is an instrumental, and sets the musical and emotional tone for what follows. A simple seven-note guitar figure loops over the squeaks and bleats of Watson’s violin and the lazy throb of bass guitar. Over several minutes these build in intensity to a triumphal peak, driven by snare and cymbal, before ebbing away again. The music shares a good deal with the unhurried, expansive instrumentals of bands such as Dirty Three and Explosions In the Sky, and is eminently listenable in its own right. From the second track (I Love The Things That Haven’t Happened Yet) these atmospheric arrangements make way for Whelan’s delivery. His voice sits a long way forward in the mix, in front of but not overpowering the accompanying tracks, clear and comprehensible. This clarity is testament both to Whelan’s skill as a performance poet and to the quality of production on the album.

Over the course of five tracks and twenty-five minutes Whelan narrates the exploits of the whimsical (or perhaps disturbed?) Betsy and her rather more prosaic suitor Ballard. The poems work as a continuous narrative, events and images recurring as the story progresses. Following his lover’s disappearance, a disconsolate Ballard (having spent the week “putting all the food in his cupboard into alphabetical order / because he didn’t know what else to do with himself”) struggles to make sense of their meeting and subsequent, sudden parting. Both characters seem more archetypes or embodiments than individuals (the mysterious, sensual feminine and the analytical, technological masculine), and Whelan leaves physical description to the imagination (save for Betsy being “all smiles and Fifties floral dress”). This doesn’t detract from the work – rather, it allows the focus to fall on what the couple do and how they feel, not who they are.

By contrast, the setting is unequivocally specific, taking in a swathe of Melbourne’s inner east (from Preston to Alphington) before winding up outside of Daylesford. Unreal things happen in these real places – this might be the Melbourne of a Marquez or Murakami, where birds and cars spell out secret messages, and women are mysterious creatures capable of disappearing at will. Then again, it could just be love, elevating the everyday into the extraordinary.

With his relaxed delivery and ability to slip in and out of rhyme with ease, it is hard not to be carried along by Whelan’s storytelling. Softly and Suddenly is a charming tale, a bedtime story of sorts for the lovelorn and poetic. The sentiment which lingers after the last bars have died away is one of hopefulness, if not happiness – a sense that there may yet be a little wonder left in the world.

Softly and Suddenly is available from Collector’s Corner, or by contacting Sean and the Lovers through their Myspace page. You can read Sean’s thoughts on the album in interview at the Overland blog.

By Tully Hansen.

page seventeen is taking a break over the Christmas and New Year period, so this will be our last post for a while. We hope you have a wonderful Christmas with lots of excellent reading and listening material and look forward to catching up in 2011.

Posted in News, Spoken word CD at December 9th, 2010. 2 Comments.

A snapshot of the launch

It took a little longer than planned but I’m finally here to point you in the direction of the Events page. We’ve loaded a few photos from the Issue 8 launch and hope you enjoy them.

The launch was a wonderful afternoon where, once again, we filled Burrinja Cafe with contributors, friends and anyone else keen to hear some poetry and enough tastes of short stories that they couldn’t help but buy the book then rush home to find out what happened.

It’s always a delight to listen to the contributors read their own pieces, and I admit to feeling a tear press against my eyelid as one of the readers announced it was the very first time she’d had her name in print. A brand spanking new writer. One of our favourite kinds.

It’s always exciting too to announce the competition winners, and even though contributors receive their copy of the magazine on arrival, it came as a shock to Leah Swann to be awarded first prize in the short story competition, as she hadn’t thought to look up the results. I think this is a first, and it was lovely to share her joy as she realised. I must admit, when I first read her story Streetsweeper I had little cry.

As with any publication, there are a lot of people who worked hard to make sure Issue 8 is as fantastic as it is. So, one last time, I’d like to extend my heartfelt thanks to Vicki Thornton, Ashley Capes, Laurie Steed and Peter Farrar for their fabulous editorial decisions, Graham Nunn and Amanda le Bas de Plumetot for the fine selection of poems and stories from the annual competition and Amanda (again) and Marian Dalton for their exceptional proofreading.

Posted in News at November 29th, 2010. No Comments.

Guest review: Mark William Jackson on Tiggy Johnson’s ‘First taste’

First Taste

by Tiggy Johnson

ISBN 978-0-9808136-0-9

‘First taste’ will be launched by Emilie Zoey Baker, this Sunday, 28th November, from 3pm at Caffe Sospeso, 428 Burwood Road, Hawthorn. All welcome.

Tiggy Johnson writes in straight, honest language. The poems collected in First Taste are not for academics, they are for readers, as all poems should be. Johnson draws a narrative bow and fires us through the trials of life, from love to loss, from birth to death, and laughter to sorrow.

The title poem is a journey through vast desserts, tracing a shared life through cakes – from a first taste of butterscotch pudding to an older person’s appetite for anzac biscuits and blueberry muffins. The poem draws a parallel between tastes and life, as we get older the rich sweetness of life is replaced by the safe and bland.

Coburg High continues the exploration of reminiscence as the narrator passes a set of buildings that once meant so much. A flood of memories rushes the page familiar appropriate to any reader who attended high school.

The introductory set of poems concludes with I remember as the narrator recounts childhood memories such as bowling her eldest brother middle stump and then never being allowed to play again. The sequence of memories concludes with a harsh reality ‘I don’t remember / ever missing it’.

The second “set” of poems is themed around pregnancy. Week sixteen removes the gloss painted over pregnancy as Johnson describes with brutal honesty the fatigue entering the second trimester.

Baby’s health is everything is a song of frustration. In spite of the best initial intentions the speed of the world and the ever presence of commercials push a mother into the fast food aisle of life. The poem closes with a sad resignation.

It’s like… should be essential reading for all males in order to gain an understanding of the horrors of morning sickness. This piece reminded me of Dr. Robert Winston who, in ‘The Body Human’, while sitting in a rubber dinghy in rough sea swell explains the feeling of morning sickness as “at first you think you’re going to die. Then you’re afraid you’re not.”

The facts injects a twist of humour into the pregnancy themed section. Through the agony of labour the narrator can “laugh” –

Like

whispering to your husband

you were sure the baby

was going to come out of your arse

only to discover later

there is no such thing

as a woman in labour

whispering.

daddy’s girl takes the up till now light hearted collection into the darkness of loss. The piece imagines the thoughts of a father on what would have been his daughter’s fifth birthday. Johnson describes the images of a child at play, but the dark tone creates a soft focus dream like picture, the poem concludes with a resounding stanza,

he tries to avoid wondering

how different his memories might be

if you’d been born

just two days before

Solitaire continues the dark path by recounting the final days of a loved one lived out in a nursing home. The poem explores the regrets of missed Mothers’ Day lunches and draws a vivid image of ambulances that arrive without any sense of urgency.

Shopping for girls is a return to the earlier theme of an individual trying to stand against multi-national commercial pressure, similar to the exploration is Baby’s health is everything the poem traces the ever increasing pace of growing up experienced by today’s children.

The collection draws to a close with Concluding and Dear Dad. Johnson brings the collection full circle as she explores the end of life. Concluding takes us into a hospital ward as a father endures one last visit from his daughter and grandchildren. The pain is expressed with sorrowful lucidity in the stanza –

We don’t stay long

you’re too tired to say more than thanks

to the kids

for their homemade birthday cards

and the cupcakes

you won’t touch.

Dear Dad is almost a tanka in its brevity. Straight to the point, it expresses the only regret of a surviving child as being that the end had to come.

The collection reads as a whole with a natural progression and delivers clearly and without any airs of pretension that we are the sum of our experiences, there is pain in birth and relief in death. But, regardless of whatever life can throw at us, butterscotch sauce is a cure-all.

Posted in Collection, News at November 23rd, 2010. 2 Comments.

2010 Competition Results

Congratulations to the winners and shortlisted entrants of this year’s Short Story and Poetry competition, and thank you to everyone who entered. Contributor and pre-ordered copies will be posted during the coming week.

Poetry section

 1st                   Shari Kocher-Campbell    Dreaming in Auslan: a Study in Yellow and Grey

2nd                   Ian Gibbins                      Lullabies, Gardens Road Cemetery

Commended   Kristen Roberts                 Nothing Left for Holding You

Shortlisted       Bob Morrow                     Strandhill

Shortlisted       Bronwyn Mehan               Rosella Jam Doesn’t Make Sense

Shortlisted       Emilie Collyer                   touch

Shortlisted       Ian Gibbins                      Shuffle

Shortlisted       Kate Alder                      Gariwerd

Shortlisted       Marlene Marburg            Like Latin

Shortlisted       Nicola Scholes                Stolen

Shortlisted       Pam Joseph                    Benediction

Shortlisted       Simon Petkovich              Laughter

Shortlisted       Sue Bailey                        Forgotten

Short Story section

 1st                  Leah Swann                  Streetsweeper

2nd                  Jacinta Butterworth       Must see the bones

Commended   Kate Rotherham            Butterflies and Dragons

Commended   Wes Lee                        The Joy Chair Shockers

Shortlisted       David Spitzkowsy           Avalanche

Shortlisted       Debi Hamilton               Vertical Blinds

Shortlisted       Jacinta Butterworth        Homekeeping handbook

Shortlisted       Jeannie Haughton           Scarier than ’Nam

Shortlisted       Robyn Wylie                  Let me tell you

Posted in News at November 14th, 2010. 2 Comments.

4, 3, 2, 1, Launch

I can hardly believe we are launching Issue 8 in just 4 days.

I would probably feel the reality of it if I there were boxes of books beside me, but that won’t happen for a couple more days. Once (issue 6 I think) they weren’t ready for collection from the printer until 4pm the day before we launched. A guaranteed way to test the nerves, but this year, it won’t come to that and I have every belief they will be ready on time.

In case you’ve forgotten the details, here they are.

We’ll be kicking things off this Saturday, 13th November, with special guest Graham Nunn at 1pm, Burrinja cafe, 351 Glenfern Rd (cnr Matson Dve), Upwey. Come along for an afternoon of friendly faces, contributor readings, the announcement and presentation of the 2010 short story and poetry competition prizes, not to mention for a great cuppa.

If you’re catching the train, this map might help. Make sure you allow about 20 minutes to walk from the station, and an hour for the train (Belgrave line).

Copies of issue 8 will be available for just $15 (cash only). They’ll revert to full price ($19.95) after the weekend. If you can’t get to the launch, there’s still time to order a copy at the discounted price, but not long. So get to it. Limited copies of back issues will also be available.

Posted in News at November 9th, 2010. 3 Comments.

Guest review: Vicki Thornton on Graham Nunn’s ‘Ocean Hearted’

Ocean Hearted, by Graham Nunn.

Another Lost Shark Publications.

I always enjoy a poetry collection that not only allows me to indulge in good poetry but takes me on a narrative journey. Graham Nunn’s Ocean Hearted is a collection that took me places, brought back memories of growing up by the seaside, and offered up visions I’ve yet to see. I was drawn into the collection from his opening poem ‘Grounded’.

In a crowded bar on Merthyr Street

he trembled like a sailor

having seen the slope of the world and its infinite

smallness, having returned

with the illusion he had not changed, but friends

had grown old and disappeared

into home and heartbreak.

All of us at one time or another, have returned, whether from a weekend away, a short holiday or an even longer absence. And once back, tried to be reabsorbed into our home/ town/ country. Nunn captures that stranger in a familiar land feeling without that nostalgic softness that often intrudes in others’ attempts.

Several of his poems, on one level look at landscape, particularly that of the river and sea. He uses the senses to capture the exactness that often is missed when a poet attempts to describe landscape. In several poems the landscape became more than a place, it became ‘place’ and therefore an integral part of the poem, such as this from ‘Riversongs’

It was good to wake this morning, knowing nothing except

there was a river, lacquered blue, streaked with light, shallow

over sand flats where flathead slouch and whiting shiver in schools

‘Good Friday, Brunswick Heads’ brought back memories I thought long forgotten.

And it stops my breath. It was a

morning incapable of cold, I never once thought of the rocks

pulling me into darkness and doing it now, I’m back there

staring at my wading boots, wondering,

the placement of them?

I recall rock fishing with my family as a child, and watching as my father was taken by a wave. Those seconds when everything froze – the sea, sky, land, all silent – then life returned. My mother screaming, us children not knowing whether to cry or not, and then my father swimming ashore –  abusing the loss of his fishing rod and the fish he swore he’d hooked just before the wave. Nunn in his poem has taken me back to that moment.

Other poems in the collection look at endings; of relationships, of life, of friendships, even the seasons.  His poem ‘Heyford Street’ offers a snapshot of the childhood home, once again without seeing through cloying nostalgic rose-tinted glasses.

Ash-grey asbestos roof tiles overlapped in patterns

reminiscent of a snake’s scales and downpipes

held emaciated fingers to the sagging eaves.

I like the honestly Nunn offers. He is a great observer and it’s the little details that he puts into a poem that resonate, gives it life and connects with the reader. I also enjoyed how he dealt with the simple domesticities of life, often setting them one minute by calm seaside breezes and next, storm-tossed skies.

From ‘Moored’:

At the window of this cheap motel

I turn to the dawn and spit.

The rain from yesterday falls bleakly

in the gap between our hearts.

What really intrigued me was how water, either represented by the river or the sea, was so much a part of his poetry.  Even the poems based on relationships, had an ebb and flow. Often as a reader I was floating with the current, allowing his words to wash over me, suddenly there would be a surge, poems such as ‘News on the phone’ and ‘Last tricks,’ a wave pulling me under and forcing me to the surface for breath.

Kevin Gillam states Nunn writes with a photographic eye and painter’s sensibility.  He does indeed do that, giving us all those details that give a poem depth, but for me there was also an honesty that added reality. I have read and re-read this collection, finding something new each time and I’m looking forward to the discovery of my next reading of Ocean Hearted.

Posted in Collection, News, Poem at November 4th, 2010. 1 Comment.

Guest post by Ashley Capes: Selecting Poetry for Issue 8

‘Poetry Editor.’ It wasn’t until Tiggy most generously asked me to take on the role for this issue of page seventeen that I realised how much I missed reading and choosing poetry for a print publication. Working on Egg (Poetry) and holland1945 were different from what I do with kipple, where I read one poem at a time. The amount of submissions that passed through the inbox (or postbox with Egg) were vastly superior.

And reading hundreds of poems from nearly two hundred writers over a few months, is another thing entirely. For one, it gave me an intimate view of a nice chunk of the Australian poetry scene. A healthy scene I might add. I also had the thrill of reading work from writers I hadn’t had read for years, people who’d made the other publications I’d been involved with so much better.

Afterwards, I realised I wanted to get some thoughts down on the editing process, and so here they are, hopefully they turn out to be of some use. As a writer, I understand how mysterious it can be, what goes on with editors when they have your work. And I’ve noticed more than a few editors making their selection process more transparent, and I think it’s a smart idea because editors deserve more credit, but also because it may help writers.

For me, editing poetry for a journal is usually split into two broad halves, selection and alteration. Both sides of the role are enjoyable, though I find that selection can be as heartbreaking as it is exciting and that’s what I want to talk about now.

In particular, it’s a tough job when a large amount of submissions fall into the ‘maybe’ pile, leaving only a small percentage of poems to be placed under the ‘yes’ heading immediately. Those that are put into the immediate ‘no’ pile can be the easy part. They are at times too wordy, too slight, too long or even too ‘soap-opera.’ Sometimes they are even missing words or letters from words – so on one hand it’s easy to pass on these poems. What’s difficult is that with hundreds of submissions, it’s not easy to find the time to tell a writer which one of these (at times) minor issues could be the reason a poem does not make a shortlist.

Proofing a poem only takes a few minutes and could mean all the difference – and I wish I could have said this or something similar to many writers who sent page seventeen work for issue eight. Instead, I spent the bulk of my time on the ‘maybe’ pile. And it was big. I was thrilled to have too much good work – it made me really happy. Sending so much of that great work back did not. But a journal is bound by its pages – and no publication has an infinite amount. Space is a consideration. And when two, three, four or more poems must compete for a single space, it comes down to slight but important differences in quality.

For issue eight I made such difficult decisions based on the following criteria (in no particular order):

1)       Is there already another poem which deals with this theme/concern/image etc in the issue/is this poem too similar in tone or structure to another poem?

2)      Would the tone or content of the entire issue become unbalanced if this poem were to be included?

3)      Which poem takes more risk in its delivery, word choice or structure etc?

4)      Which poem communicates best?

5)      Which poem do I think people will want to read more than once?

These are questions that come to mind at all times during a reading period, but especially when it’s down to a number of great poems vying for one page. And some of those criteria are subjective ones, but that is to be expected. Art is subjective, that’s why it’s fun, difficult and ultimately worthwhile. Many of the shortlisted poems that missed out, missed out due to one or two of the criteria above. And I did my best to inform those writers of that, because I feel it’s important to know why a piece was sent back. A rejection on those grounds isn’t a rejection of the poem itself, rather, it’s more a rejection of that particular poem at that particular time and in the context of that particular journal’s current issue.

Looking back over the poetry, and talking to the short story editors, I’m convinced that this issue will be one of the best. I’ve certainly been blessed by the work our poets sent for number eight, and so I’d like to thank them again.

Ashley Capes

Posted in News at October 26th, 2010. 4 Comments.